Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Gary Stu and his AMAZING Adventures!


It was the best of times, it was the worst of times, but for Gary Stu, it was intensely mediocre. Gary had lived on Earth for thirty-seven years, the majority of which had been spent in his mother’s lampless basement, slaughtering the art of video gaming.  

At the time our story begins, however, he had taken a break to dry his sweaty palms, and to check his lonely email inbox.  Today, though, he was overjoyed to find a pleasant surprise waiting for him. Somebody loves me, he thought, as he clicked the email.

“Send this to twenty people by the end of the day or you will be hit by a car,” it read.

“I accept your quest,” Gary whispered, and then proceeded to print out twenty copies of the email.  He stumbled up out of his mother’s pink paisley beanbag chair.

Meanwhile, thirty miles away, in a corporate office, John Smith slowly and with repetition pressed the send button.  “Send… send… send.”

With Herculean effort, Gary trudged out of the basement and into the blinding morning sun.  Its brightness caught him off guard, and before long he stumbled and tripped over the unfortunately placed overpass.  Luckily, he landed in a soft pile of trash bags.

When he came to, Gary was face-to-face with a bearded man wearing tattered clothes and a paper bag on his head.  “There ain’t gonna be ‘nuther grocery cart!” the man shouted.

“I know you!” exclaimed Gary Stu.  “You’re Hobo-Juan Kenobo!  I’m in a need of a wise, spiritual guide.  Care to join me on my quest of delivering these letters?”

“Gov’ment muskrats!” agreed Hobo-Juan.  And so they set off together.

Gary Stu was feeling confident in the work that had been done so far. He was about to congratulate himself on his accomplishments when all of a sudden, a shiny police car pulled up beside him.  The fat police officer inside rolled down his window and shouted, “Gary Stu, it has come to my attention that you are currently participating in delivering illegal chain letters.  The old lady on the bench told me so.”

Hobo-Juan slyly waved his grubby hand in front of the cops face and said, “These are not the letters you are looking for.”

The policeman blinked, dazed for a moment, then repeated, “These are not the letters I am looking for.  Move along, move along.”

Sighing with relief, Gary turned to Hobo-Juan Kenobo and said, “Thanks!  I think I can handle it from there though.”

No sooner had Hobo-Juan departed and Gary took his first step onto the cross walk, when a distracted driver took a sharp right turn, and ran over Gary’s left foot.

“Holy Superman’s tights!” he screamed in agony, holding his injured foot.  The last letter fell from his hand and he watched in desperation as it slipped down into the sewer.  “No, I must get that back!” he shouted.

He jumped down a conveniently open manhole in pursuit of the precious letter. Up above, the dusky sky told him that he was running out of time. Blindly, Gary struggled to locate the letter. He was about to give up and accept his fate when Hobo-Juan Kenobo’s bearded face loomed out of the darkness. In his right hand was clutched the desired letter.

“You are running out of time, Gary Stu,” Hobo-Juan said.

“I still have enough time to find another person to hand this to,” Stu said with confidence.  “I’m not afraid.”

“You will be… You will be….” Hobo-Juan began to warn.

Gary simply shook his head, waving a hand dismissively, and looked up towards the manhole above him. Tiny pillars of light flooded in, causing his coke bottle glasses to glisten. Filled with hope and determination, Gary took a firm hold of a ladder in front of him, and made his way to the surface.

He threw open the manhole, the light blinding him as it had when he first left his home. He squinted, trying to make out the surrounding objects. A few buildings and a lamppost faded into view. He noticed a nearby apartment building; like the ones he had seen in his video games. He knew that there had to be someone inside. Someone who would be willing to read his letter. As a feeling of victory overwhelmed him, Gary began to make his speech.

“It was he who dared to deliver the forbidden letters, he who defied the law and traversed the dark depths of a forgotten world. He who left home and achieved the impossible against all odds shall be remembered as Gary Stu!”

He hoisted himself up out of the manhole, and began to make his way towards the apartment. He took his first step, his hopes and confidence unmatched by any emotion Gary had felt up to that point. Today, he would make something of himself.

Suddenly, the sound of a car horn pierced the blissful silence. As Gary looked in the direction of the noise, he found himself peering through the oncoming vehicle’s windshield.

John Smith’s white knuckles clutched the steering wheel as he stared helplessly at the man who had just appeared on the street.  There was a screeching of tires, and a dull thump registered in his numbed ears. John stopped the vehicle, clambered out, and ran around to the dying man.  

As the light at the end of the tunnel loomed closer, Gary happily handed the last letter to the man stooped over him.  

John grabbed the letter, not knowing what else to do, and skimmed over it.  He gasped in horror. It was the same message that he had sent out earlier that morning.

The end

I, along with friends, wrote this for our final project in a summer camp writing course at BYU. Every member of the class helped to write this story, which is incredibly ridiculous to us, but maybe not to you, because it does include A LOT of inside jokes! 

Monday, January 28, 2013

My Story, Chapter 2: Mori


Ah, the sweet smell of buns and cocoa and the Market Place are like none but the lilac and the apple blossoms in the spring. Common, yet rare and wondrous. I stop at the little peanut shack and buy a bag, just to keep the man from losing home. The shrieks from the next stall hurry me along though, and there is no time for dawdling.
            I cannot bear to look, but I do and find nothing is wrong. Only a mouse has disturbed Mistress Okray, and a mouse is nothing compared to the Spornids, or the Tapels, or the dreaded Magen.
            Oh, the Magen! Powerful Magi so overcome that they spawned a new group of evil. Glory be, the gracious Magi, to allow the Magen to add.
            Before the mouse may meet his death, I scoop him up and dump him near the Eastern wall, then buy a square of chocolate and a loaf of sugar bun. The cocoa and loaf are so sweet I crumble a bit for the mice and wrap the rest up for Sani.
            I continue with my shopping, buying rice and lettuce and cloth and parchment and beans, then hurry on my way. I want to get home to mother and little Sani, and Toku and Fahr.
            The leed merchant looks so pale I buy a packet from him just to pay. I wonder about his family and Horspurt. I know he has one. I hope he is well.
            About fifty years ago, the Orken from the south came and brought with them many goods, the likes of which had never been seen by our people before. One of these goods was Borkenshmitz, a meat dish prepared with teaberries and a plant called Orn.  This dish held a toxic called Pornet, which the Orken found harmless, but my people found it deadly. It weakened everyone who ate it and killed many. The disease,   called the Black Sickness by the people, was contagious and many caught it. Only the Orken were immune.
            Leed was a common grain, a hybrid of barley and oats. It, mixed with water and honey, could make the Black Sickness easier to overcome. But, a drought had come a year before and killed away many crops. The Sickness came at a time before harvest, and not much leed was in store.
            Around that time, yet it was maybe ten years before, all poor who needed food could take out a Horspurt. A Horspurt was a bet made with the government that for every week you worked without getting harmed, your family would get one bucket of rice, a square of tea, an apple, a loaf of plum bread, a bag of corn, and a salt of beef or horse. But, the food would not come unless nobody mentioned it for another week. At the end of every month, the food would come. Sometimes, the government would give more or less food than betted for.
            To symbolize a Horspurt, the family has one more mouth to feed- a Spornid. A Spornid is a creature with finger length fangs, finger length legs, and finger length ears. The creature are very loveable, although if treated badly use the fangs for a horrible purpose. You see, Spornids are like vampire kittens.

Thursday, January 3, 2013

a school story pt 2


“Well, that’s good. But, we still haven’t done anything!”
         “Okay, um, so, I’m not sure we have enough wood.” I said, looking over at Hana, who was slouched in her chair.
         “Wood? What do we need wood for?” Alia was confused.
         “Well, you know, structural supports.”
         “What?”
         I sighed.
         “A mud house isn’t going to stay up very well without some sort of structure, at least for a basic shape,” Hana said, her smartness kicking in.
         “Oh,” said Alia. “Well that’s boring.”
         “I’m pretty sure a hollow mud pile is more exciting than a filled one,” I said dryly. “I mean, you can go inside a hollow mud pile much more easily.”
         “She’s got a point there, Alia. You need more wood.”
         “Fine,” Alia said stubbornly, “but I’m not getting it.”
         “Awesome!” I said before Hana could get a word in edgewise. “I’ll take care of that. Oh, and blue is a good color. It symbolizes freedom.”
         And I hung up the phone.
         “Yare, that was mean.”
         “So? She was getting on my nerves.”
         Hana rolled her eyes and got out of her chair.
         “Yo, Hana, where you going?”
         “To the kitchen actually. Want to come? I hear they’re quite interesting places, kitchens.”
         I rolled my eyes and followed her out of the room.
         When we got to the kitchen, Hana’s mom was already in there, along with Britta, Hana’s five-year-old sister.
         Mrs. Merisse looked up from her chopping when we came in. She nodded over at Britta. I smiled at her, and then picked up her little daughter.
         “How are you today, Lil’ Miss? World spinning right? Wanna make a mud house?”
         Britta clapped and Mrs. Merisse glared at me.
         “Sorry, Mrs. Merisse.”
         Hana’s mom sighed.
         “Call me Lucy, Yariana.”
         “Call me Yare, and maybe I’ll think about it.”
         Hana’s mom sighed again.
         I grinned and walked out of the room.
         Hana came up behind me.
         “You are so mean!”
         “No I’m not, I’m insanely polite.”
         “I’m po-ite. Mommy says so,” Britta interjected.
         “That’s right, Lil’ Miss,” I confirmed. “You’re so polite, I bet no cannibal would eat you because you’re so nice.”
         “Yare!”
         “What?” I turned to Hana, acting innocent.
         “That’s exactly what I mean. You say and do stupid things without thinking, and you get in trouble. But apparently you haven’t gotten in enough trouble yet, because you’re still being stupid!”
         “I don’t understand, Hana, because I’m pretty sure that I’ve never gotten in trouble, and I must be pretty brilliant to be able to build houses out of mud, jump from roof to roof without getting harmed, and ride a wild donkey.”
         “No, Yare, you don’t understand. The fact that you would even try to ride a wild donkey just proves that you’re stupid. No one in their right mind would.”
         “Well, maybe I’m not in my right mind. Maybe I switched my right mind five years ago for a better one.”
         “Oh, I know you’re not in your right mind. Want to know how I know? Because I’ve been your best friend for years and I’ve had to put up with all this, and about five years or so ago you all of a sudden turned stupid. You’re not in your right mind, that’s for sure. You’re in your wrong mind, and there seems to be nothing I can do about it. Good luck out there, Yare, with Alia and your mud house, because I’m not helping. I’m not even gonna come. So put down my sister before she starts worshipping you, and go. I don’t want to see you around here until you show me some of those brains I know you have in there. Go.”
         I stood, my mouth hanging open, dumbfounded. I heard a small “ow!” as I, presumably, dropped Britta on the floor of the Merisses’ living room. I couldn’t believe it. Hana, my best friend was kicking me out of her house, a place I practically lived, because I wasn’t acting the way she wanted me to. I didn’t know what to do.

HerStory: A Radio Show Podcast

In 8th grade LA class (which is the same as English), to end our unit on the play The Diary of Anne Frank we had to do a two-part project. The first part was an essay that we were to complete on one of two topics, and the second was a creative representation of that topic. I chose to write my report on a theme in the play. I was then supposed to select a theme to do my creative bit about. But I'm not going to tell you the theme I chose quite yet. You have to listen to my creative piece first. You see, I chose to write and record a radio show.

My story, Chapter 1: Anya


“Nyah nyah!” Rickey taunted.
            I was getting fed up. I ran behind the crowd so I couldn’t be seen. I crept along the wall until only two rows of spectators were in front of me. I pounced. Well, actually I ran, but when I reached Rickey I jumped with my teeth barred and hands outstretched. So really, it was practically a pounce.
            Anyway, I pounced at Rickey and my best friend Keel buried her head in her hands and everybody else screamed. Everyone except Rickey, because he couldn’t see, but he would’ve screamed too, and anyways he should have known what was coming. You see, I’m a vampire. Yeah. It’s scary.  No one actually knows though, except Keel and the Magi, but the whole school still knows that I bite people. Apparently, that’s how I deal with stress. It can’t be helped.
            So anyway, I put one hand on Rickey’s head and my other on his shoulder and I bit down hard and drew up blood. I had these little tubes in my canines that held a tiny drop of blood whenever I drew some. I could blow it out later and suck it up or store it or whatever. That’s just how it worked. Once they were bitten, my ‘victim’ would fall asleep for any amount of time raging from 5 minutes to a whole day! The longest a person ever slept was ten years, but I couldn’t do that. Never in my life could I do that. Never ever.
            Anyway, Rickey was asleep, dripping blood, and my friends Hallen, Calli, Sara, and Keel were pulling a limp me towards the nurses’ office. When we reached the nurse, my friends pushed me against a row of lockers and stuffed a red pill in my mouth. This would keep me from biting for a while. Then, we heard footsteps. Ms. Cornell, the nurse, Mr. Fikes, the principal, and Mrs. Meel, my homeroom teacher, walked up to me.
            “What were you thinking?!” Mrs. Meel, who was a slight bit hyperactive, screamed.
            “Ah…” I gurgled bloody spit.        
            “Anya got angry and pretty riled up ‘cause Rickey McMeagan was taunting Lee Chase, right? So Anya got furious and went at ‘im. Sure, Rickey’s asleep, but at least Anya won’t be biting for a while.”
            You gotta love Keel.
            “Yeah!” helped Hallen, and then Calli, ever helpful, nodded seriously.
            “Definitely!” exclaimed Calli.
            “Alright, now no more biting, okay?” Mr. Fikes said.
            “Not on my watch,” Keel responsibly said.
            The teachers left and, as soon as they were out of earshot, “Go Anya! Go Keel!” Life was good. We held a little celebration party in the hall right there, because Keel and I are awesome.
            Later that day, Sara, Keel, and I were sitting together on the bus ride home. Sara was going on about how awesome her soccer team was, until Billie Andrews moved away, Keel was doodling, and I was staring up at the speaker waiting for an interesting song to come on over the radio.
 “Seriously,” Keel said. “I don’t care about Billie Andrews’s soccer team in Detroit. Tell us about her boyfriend Jemison, and she loved anyone who found him interesting. Actually, Keel and I thought that Jemison was a pig, but Keel just wanted Sara to shut up about Billie Andrews, and Keel didn’t really like soccer. I have no idea why.
Anyway, Sara was going on about her wedding plans, Keel was dozing off, and I was hunched over covering my ears, the music was so terrible.
“Sara, shut up!” the ever-present Tommy Pincher shouted.
“Well, Kara Pielatti isn’t any better!” Sara screeched.
“Guys, shut up!” I muttered.
“Children, SIT DOWN!” the bus driver, Mrs. Misameti yelled over the major hubbub of the big yellow bus.
“SHUT UP!” Keel screamed, and yanked Tommy and Sara down by the back of their shirts. Tommy felt so defeated that he just sat there and didn’t say anything for the rest of the ride. Sara was no different. She just sat there glaring at Tommy Pincher with her nose up in the air.
Two stops later, Sara got off. At the next stop, the bus was drained of sixth graders. While Tommy annoyed Eloise Spart, Keel and I made a mad rush to the Candy Café, an ice cream parlor and candy store, which was conveniently located in our neighborhood.
Once at the Café, we each ordered our Pecan Coco Hot Fudge Sundaes and sat down at a back table. We quietly ate our sundaes and talked about the day’s events. When our sundaes were finished, we each bought a Crunch bar and left.
Up in my room, I took a vile from a metal lock box underneath my bed. I quietly ejected the blood from my tubes and into the vile. I used my label maker to make a label that said ‘Rickey McMeagan’ on it and put it on the vile. I put the vile back in the box and closed it up. I retreated to my desk and finished my homework.  


I wrote this story in 6th grade, and continued into the beginning of 7th. Through an interesting turn of events, I lost the "manuscript" and didn't get it back until kind of recently. I have not edited it, so some of the grammar is a little off, and there are a few places where i skipped some words or mistyped, so it might not make any sense. Sorry 'bout that. This is the longest story I've ever written (so far) so it may take a while before you've read it all :) enjoy!

a poem

open
open up
the book i see i open
to go into its world
to live its life
to fall in love
to breath, to hope, to die
i open the book
willing it
hoping it
knowing it
"someday" i think
"someday that will be me"
but for now i rest
i sit, i sleep, i eat
my book
my chair
and me 

waiting
watching
what next?
every page, every corner
enveloping me
a movie in my mind
my way
the story written but not yet told
another page
another breath
i watch, i wait, i gasp
is it? it is
is it? no

and then it ends
leaving me
with feels, with a heart
racing, pounding
oxygen depleting
vision swirling, i come out
out of my cocoon of that
of that world i was a part of
a character, my own story
within a story
to read and read again
that life, it ended
but maybe
just maybe
a sequel? or no
on to the next
the next life, the next world



I wrote this poem for a contest on one of my favorite Facebook pages, Living To Read Fantasy. This is my entry for their contest. You can see my poem, along with others, in the page's photo album Poem Contest.


Sunday, December 9, 2012

a school story pt 1


Alia McCarr was never my favorite person, but neither was Hana Merisse, and I never left her side. Maybe I should have at some point, but I grew to rely on her for making sure I didn’t die or do something so stupid it was worse than death. Stupid things included going rock climbing without ropes when I had never so much as climbed a playground rock wall, skipping class to ask the principal if we could fire my math teacher, and stacking trampolines on top of each other to create an amusement park across the street from Town Hall. If it weren’t for Hana, I wouldn’t be telling this story, so I guess something good came out of being her most faithful comrade.
         Anyway, on that fateful day in late June, I was developing yet another stupid idea. Alia was on the phone, screaming about rope ladders and blocks of cement, and Hana’s brother, Mickey, was complaining from the other room about how we wouldn’t take Alia off speakerphone.
         “Yare, you can’t do this. It’s even stupider than when you made bombs in the basement,” Hana whispered into my ear. “You’re just going to make a mess, and it won’t solve anything.”
         “But that’s where you’re wrong, Hana,” I whispered back as Alia screeched something about Native American bungalows, “it won’t make a mess.”
         “How, Yare? How?”
         “Listen, I got this under control. I promise we won’t use rope ladders.”
         “Actually, I think the rope ladders are the only good part of the plan.”
         I shot a wicked smile in Hana’s direction. She rolled her eyes.
         “Are you even listening to me?” Alia’s voice boomed through the room.
         “Yeah, yeah, I am. But, listen, can we not use the rope ladders?”
         “WHAT!?”
         “Sorry, sorry, sorry. I was just thinking it’s a little over excessive, but, hey. We can keep ‘em if you like.”
         “Good,” She sounded satisfied. “Now, we need to decide what color to paint the wall once it’s dried.”
         “What? You’re painting the wall? Why didn’t I know about this?” Hana demanded.
         “Um, I don’t know, maybe because you weren’t listening?” Alia’s voice crackled through the speakers.
         “Oh, yeah, Hana, seriously?” I sounded angry, but Hana had spent enough time with me to know that my eyes were glinting with a joking amusement.
         Hana gave me a grin.
         “Sorry, Yare. I’ll listen more closely next time.”
         “Umm, hello? What about me?” Alia said, because, being on the phone, couldn’t see our joke.
         “I’m sorry to you, too, Alia,” Hana said, not breaking eye contact with me.
         I was beaming from ear to ear. “Yeah, she’s sorry, Alia.”

~to be continued~


I wrote this for school the other day when we had a "personal prompt" for our online journals. We were allowed to write at least seven sentences of whatever we wanted, and I chose to write this.