Merge pull request #236 from w3c/editorial-feb23

wareid · web-flow · commit 2e8f6d01d140 · 2023-03-28T09:32:47.000-04:00
Editorial Changes
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
@@ -47,21 +47,18 @@
   </head>
   <body>
     <section id="abstract">
+      <p class="ed-note">The wording of this section is under review.</p>
       <p>
-        W3C's <cite>Code of Conduct</cite> defines
-        accepted and acceptable behaviors and promotes high standards of
+        W3C's <cite>Code of Ethics and Professional Conduct</cite> defines
+        expected and unacceptable behaviors and promotes high standards of
         professional practice. The goals of this code are to:
       </p>
       <ul>
-        <li>Define acceptable and expected standards of behavior.
-        </li>
-        <li>Provide a benchmark.
+        <li>Ensure an environment where people can participate without fear of
+          harassment.
         </li>
         <li>Ensure transparency in community and group management.
         </li>
-        <li>Ensure an environment where people can participate without fear of
-        harassment.
-        </li>
         <li>Contribute to the identity of the organization.
         </li>
       </ul>
@@ -87,7 +84,6 @@ <h2>
         misunderstandings and disagreements happen, which in most cases can be
         resolved informally.
       </p>
-      <p>
         W3C's <cite>Code of Conduct</cite>
         (<abbr title="Code of Conduct">CoC</abbr>) is
         useful to define accepted and <a>acceptable behaviors</a> and to
@@ -131,8 +127,7 @@ <h2>
         Statement of Intent
       </h2>
       <p>
-        W3C is committed to maintaining a <strong>positive</strong> work
-        environment. This commitment calls for a workplace where
+        W3C is committed to maintaining a <strong>positive</strong> work environment for all, including and especially those from historically marginalized communities. This commitment calls for a workplace where
         <a>participants</a> at all levels behave according to the rules of the
         following code. A foundational concept of this code is that <em>we all
         share responsibility</em> for our work environment.
