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                     <span class="date"><time class="entry-date" datetime="2017-02-22T12:00:00+00:00"
                             >22 February 2017</time></span> by <span class="author vcard"><a
+                            class="url fn n" href="https://www.w3.org/blog/author/azaroth/"
+                            title="View all posts by Robert Sanderson" rel="author">Robert Sanderson</a>, <a
                             class="url fn n" href="https://www.w3.org/blog/author/tcole/"
-                            title="View all posts by Timothy Cole" rel="author">Rob Sanderson and Timothy
+                            title="View all posts by Timothy Cole" rel="author">Timothy
                         Cole</a></span> | Posted in: <span class="categories-links">
                         <a href="https://www.w3.org/blog/category/technology/annotation/"
                             rel="category tag">Annotation</a>, <a
                             href="https://www.w3.org/blog/category/digital-publishing/"
                             rel="category tag">Digital Publishing</a></span>
-                    <!-- span class="tags-links">, <a href="https://www.w3.org/blog/tags/webannotation/" rel="tag">Web Annotation</a></span -->
+                    <span class="tags-links">, <a href="https://www.w3.org/blog/tags/dpub/" rel="tag">DPUB</a></span>
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-            <p>The W3C has announced the <a href="">publication</a> of three new standards aimed to
+            <p>The W3C has announced the 
+                <!-- Add URL to W3C publication announcement --><a href="">publication</a> 
+                of three new standards aimed to
                 enable an ecosystem of interoperable products that let the world comment on,
                 describe, tag, and link any resource on the Web. Many websites already allow
                 comments, but current annotation systems rely on unique, usually proprietary
@@ -60,8 +64,8 @@ <h1 class="title">Making it Easier to Share Annotations on the Web</h1>
                 spell the end of the phrase "Don't read the comments!", returning power to the
                 readers decide where and how they provide and consume such feedback. </p>
             <h2>What the Web Annotation Standards Do</h2>
-            <p>The three new standards describe how to precisely identify the target of an
-                annotation within a Web resource. They provide a basic data structure and protocol
+            <p>The three new standards describe how to precisely identify the target, body and metadata of 
+                an annotation of a Web resource. They provide a basic data structure and protocol
                 to ensure interoperability among annotation systems, but they do not dictate how
                 annotation tools and services are realized in terms of user interface features and
                 functionality. Each of the standards serves a specific purpose: </p>
@@ -86,9 +90,9 @@ <h2>What the Web Annotation Standards Do</h2>
                 use cases with tailored interfaces and services. This will encourage new innovations
                 and the emergence of community-based best practices. For example, The W3C Working
                 Group Note on <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/annotation-html/">Embedding Web
-                    Annotations in HTML</a>, published concurrently with the 3 Web Annotation
+                    Annotations in HTML</a>, published concurrently with the three Web Annotation
                 Recommendations, describes and illustrates just a few of the potential approaches
-                for including annotations within HTML documents and is intended to serve as a
+                for including annotations within HTML documents, serving as a
                 starting point for further discussion, experimentation and development. </p>
             <h2>Getting This Far and What's Ahead</h2>
             <p>The work on the annotation specifications started in 2009 with two independent
@@ -102,7 +106,9 @@ <h2>Getting This Far and What's Ahead</h2>
                     href="https://www.w3.org/community/openannotation/#group-reports">initial draft
                     specifications</a>. 2014 saw the creation of the Web Annotation Working Group to
                 take the work through the standardization process and further the engagement with
-                the web community, resulting in the specifications published on February 21st, 2017. </p>
+                the web community, resulting in the specifications published on February 21st, 2017. 
+                <!-- Correct this date as necessary. -->
+            </p>
             <p>As a diverse group of Web developers, publishers, and content creators note below,
                 this work is and will be increasingly important as the volume and speed of
                 information publishing continue to grow. The world has seen a dramatic increase in
@@ -115,7 +121,7 @@ <h2>Getting This Far and What's Ahead</h2>
                 them in full. Though much hard work remains to be done, a formal standard for a
                 universal web annotation layer is a critical step in the development of this
                 promising new paradigm.</blockquote>
-            <p>The potential breadth of Web annotation tools and services magnifies the impact of
+            <p>The broad, growing interest in Web annotation tools and services magnifies the likely impact of
                 these specifications. As Dan Whaley, of Hypothes.is and the <a
                     href="https://hypothes.is/annotating-all-knowledge/"> Annotating All
                     Knowledge</a> coalition, notes, the publication of these Recommendations means
@@ -159,11 +165,14 @@ <h2>Acknowledgments and Further Information</h2>
                 members of the Open Annotation Community Group. It has always been a community
                 effort. We are grateful for the past, present, and future work underway around these
                 specifications. </p>
-            <p>For further information please contact the Chairs of the Web Annotation Working
+            <p>For further information please <a href='mailto:[email protected]'>contact the Chairs</a> 
+                of the Web Annotation Working
                 Group, Dr. Robert Sanderson (J. Paul Getty Trust) and Prof. Timothy Cole (University
                 of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign). To discuss uses of the Web Annotation
                 Recommendations or to participate in the creation of implementations based on these
-                Specifications, please join the Open Annotation W3C Community Group</p>
+                Specifications, please join the <a
+                    href="https://www.w3.org/community/openannotation/">W3C Open Annotation
+                    Community Group</a>.</p>
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